Bonjour, Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger s'il y a une erreur s'il vous plait ? ................................... 2 Writing b) 1) I ask him what he is doing. 2)
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Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger s'il y a une erreur s'il vous plait ?
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2 Writing
b)
1) I ask him what he is doing.
2) He answered he is doing his homework.
3) I asked what he is doing in his band.
4) He said that I sing and play all the instruments.
5) I asked what did he play in his school band.
6) He said that he played the guitare.
3)
b)
1) Ludovic Lamothe not only was a player, but he was a composer too.
2) Ludovic Lamothe not only was played the clarinet, but he the piano too.
3) Lodovic Lamothe not only studied in Marseille, but he studied too in Paris too.
4) He not only played in private homes, but he played in front of a large audience too.
Pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger s'il y a une erreur s'il vous plait ?
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2 Writing
b)
1) I ask him what he is doing.
2) He answered he is doing his homework.
3) I asked what he is doing in his band.
4) He said that I sing and play all the instruments.
5) I asked what did he play in his school band.
6) He said that he played the guitare.
3)
b)
1) Ludovic Lamothe not only was a player, but he was a composer too.
2) Ludovic Lamothe not only was played the clarinet, but he the piano too.
3) Lodovic Lamothe not only studied in Marseille, but he studied too in Paris too.
4) He not only played in private homes, but he played in front of a large audience too.
1 Réponse
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1. Réponse nathea
Bonsoir
petit probléme de concordance de temps..
Je vais pas tout ré-écrire (un peu tard...) mais je te mets les corrections
b)
1- I asked him what he WAS doing
2- he answered (that) he WAS doing...
3- I asked HIM what he WAS doing...
3- He said (that) HE SANG and PLAYED......
4- I asked HIM what he HAD PLAYED....
5- He said (that) he HAD PLAYED...
concordance des temps =
phrase au présent---> prétérit
phrase au prétérit-----> plus que parfait (had + p.passé)
on monte à chaque fois d'un cran dans le passé.
le problème est qu'il est tard et je m'embrouille.... du coup j'ai un doute pour la 4 et 5...mais logiquement c'est ça...
pour la 4 et 5, je "pense que logiquement" il faut rajouter "HIM" après ask ..
????
that est facultatif
3
b)
1- OK
2- Ludovic Lamotte was not only playing the clarinet, but he was playing the piano too.
3- He not only studied in Port-au-Prince, but he studied in Paris too.
4- He not only... = OK
pour la 2, not only doit se placer entre l'auxiliaire et le verbe-ing
Bon, j'espère ne pas avoir fait de bêtises...
Bonne journée :)