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bonjour tout le monde, s il vous plait, vous pouvez m aidez sur un devoir. Je l ai commencé, j aimerais que vous me le corrigiez tout en le finissant vu que je suis plutot perdue

writing: you were shipwrecked and ended up on a desert island. write about the shipwreck ( use simple past) and your experience on the island since the shipwreck up till now (use present perfect/ mind you, you are still stuck on the island) . write your text as a message in a bottle and ask for help.


bref j espère que vous allez m aider

merci d avance ❤
bonjour tout le monde, s il vous plait, vous pouvez m aidez sur un devoir. Je l ai commencé, j aimerais que vous me le corrigiez tout en le finissant vu que je

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  • OK je vais réécrire ce texte sans faute:

    One day, I went to the sea to catch some fish, with my dad. At 8 o'clock, we were already sitting on our fishing boat. Suddenly, at noon, there were so many clouds in the sky, more than usual, the wind was blowing strongly, then it started raining: the storm began.
    The boat turned upside down as I was trying my best to swim to catch it because the waves were sending far away. Unfortunately, my efforts were in vain, the boat already disappeared.
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    Later, I found myself laying down on the yellow sand, I looked up at the sky, the storm was over and the weather was warm. The ship had been carried away by the tide, it's like it was been pushed away, hard. I looked around me, I was alone, but I still decided to discover the island to be completely certain.I was walking with fear, I was almost trembling. There were so many trees, coconut palms,palm trees, banana trees and some incredible flowers.It was the most beautiful lanscape I've ever seen.
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    At night, when I was sure of what I've said, I was aware that I was all alone on a deserted island. I didn't even know where I was exactly, all I could do was wait for some people to find me

    Voilà^^ je voulais aussi ajouter que j'amais beacoup ton histore XD 

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