bonjour a tous j'aurais besoin de votre aide s'il vous plait Pourriez vous me corriger pas lettre de motivation qui est en anglais Dear lady and sir As I am cur
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bonjour a tous j'aurais besoin de votre aide s'il vous plait
Pourriez vous me corriger pas lettre de motivation qui est en anglais
Dear lady and sir
As I am currently looking for a odd job, I would like to offer you my job application.
Indeed, I will be available as indicated in the job offer.
It is with great seriousness that I plan to take up this student job. It will allow me to know the reality of the professional world and to adapt to it in all modesty.
Applied , honest and sociable, I wish to occupy this position with all the seriousness and the enthusiasm which I already show in the pursuit of my studies. My ability to adapt allows me to integrate very quickly into a team.
To occupy this student job is for me a real chance to move forward in life
I remain at your disposal for any additional information, or to meet you during an interview.
Please accept, (Madam, Sir), the expression of my sincere greetings.
Pourriez vous me corriger pas lettre de motivation qui est en anglais
Dear lady and sir
As I am currently looking for a odd job, I would like to offer you my job application.
Indeed, I will be available as indicated in the job offer.
It is with great seriousness that I plan to take up this student job. It will allow me to know the reality of the professional world and to adapt to it in all modesty.
Applied , honest and sociable, I wish to occupy this position with all the seriousness and the enthusiasm which I already show in the pursuit of my studies. My ability to adapt allows me to integrate very quickly into a team.
To occupy this student job is for me a real chance to move forward in life
I remain at your disposal for any additional information, or to meet you during an interview.
Please accept, (Madam, Sir), the expression of my sincere greetings.
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bonjour, je trouve ça très bien seulement le occupy est un peu repetitif essaye de le remplacer . bravo