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Everything begins on July the 28th, 1914. It is Alfie's birthday, he is a ten-year-old boy. His father promised him that he would not go to war and that everything would be over at Christmas, but his father got dressed (je comprends pas trop ce que tu veux dire) and never came back.

Why I loved this book ?

I wanted to know what happened to the father until the end